I'm about half way through chapter eleven and it is good so far, although it seems like this may have been one of the first books she has ever written. It is good but i have noticed a few errors, I'm no expert but I'm coming from the readers point of view. It seems to me that she reiterates herself several time and she fails to give me (as a reader) the emotions the characters are going though. She likes to jump into a lot of her scenarios without explaining the emotions of her characters to a deeper level. Maybe thats the way her characters are supposed to be since they are technically the undead. But overall the story line and characters are good. I know this series is now up to several books so I'm sure the writing has gotten better.
Well hope you enjoy my commentary of these two books...
Thanks
-CuriousWriter93
